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Post by Mini Mia on Nov 5, 2009 2:35:15 GMT -6
Okay, I've been seeing this all over twitter too, and I thought I'd try it here. So, change an original line in a film to what it could have been in the very first draft, such as:
Final Draft:
Luke, I am your father.
First Draft:
Luke, I am your third cousin.
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Post by Gabrielle On Nutbread on Nov 5, 2009 12:41:06 GMT -6
"If you build it, he will come."
First draft:
"If you plow under your corn and build a baseball field, then drive all around the country hunting for random people, a younger version of your dad will show up to play baseball on the field you built."
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Post by Mini Mia on Feb 18, 2010 23:52:48 GMT -6
Final Draft: "There's no place like home."
First Draft: "Other places just ain't the same as home."
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