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Post by Phalon on Dec 15, 2016 7:09:57 GMT -6
I'm glad you decided to resurrect him...and the house too. Looking forward to seeing how both characters evolve under your deft imagination - for the house, I think, wasn't just a setting or a prop; it became a character in the story.
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Post by Phalon on Dec 19, 2016 6:00:38 GMT -6
A good rule of thumb: never trust a nun who takes you to a creepy old, abandoned house on a hill.
That's what I always say anyway.
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Post by moonglum on Dec 19, 2016 14:24:14 GMT -6
A good rule of thumb: never trust a nun who takes you to a creepy old, abandoned house on a hill. That's what I always say anyway. Oi, nun of that! |
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Post by Phalon on Dec 20, 2016 7:25:43 GMT -6
Sorry, it's a bad habit! HA!
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Post by moonglum on Dec 20, 2016 13:50:59 GMT -6
(groan), I'm nun too happy about that one. Hee Hee
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Post by Phalon on Dec 21, 2016 5:51:32 GMT -6
Do you think Sister V sits down before a meal and says, "Let us prey"?
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Post by Mini Mia on Dec 21, 2016 17:21:25 GMT -6
Oh. That was genius!
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Post by moonglum on Dec 22, 2016 13:12:27 GMT -6
Do you think Sister V sits down before a meal and says, "Let us prey"? It's highly likely and very good, top of the class. I can't top that. |
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Post by Phalon on Dec 24, 2016 9:24:23 GMT -6
HA!
Psst, Jason....she most certainly did do it deliberately.
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Post by moonglum on Dec 24, 2016 11:11:50 GMT -6
HA! Psst, Jason....she most certainly did do it deliberately. I did imagine her saying it with a wry sense of irony. The bristling would have been for effect and not meant to convey anger. A merry christmas and a happy new year to all scribes, wordsmiths and lyricists everywhere. |
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Post by Phalon on Dec 24, 2016 13:00:15 GMT -6
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and Voxie Lady too!
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Post by Phalon on Feb 1, 2017 22:57:57 GMT -6
Ah, Bertie and Tilly. Good to see them again. Seemed like such a nice couple from our one visit with them all those years ago!
Then again, Sister V seemed nice at first too!
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Post by moonglum on Feb 5, 2017 14:03:37 GMT -6
Ah, Bertie and Tilly. Good to see them again. Seemed like such a nice couple from our one visit with them all those years ago! Then again, Sister V seemed nice at first too! Yes, you never can tell. As they say up north, 'There's nowt as queer as folk!' |
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Post by Phalon on Feb 13, 2017 7:13:50 GMT -6
Moonglum, have you ever thought about or done anything with Jason's story outside of the board?
I can even see it as a great graphic novel series.
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Post by moonglum on Feb 14, 2017 13:49:02 GMT -6
Moonglum, have you ever thought about or done anything with Jason's story outside of the board? I can even see it as a great graphic novel series. I did think about it a while back. But there are large parts of it that are interwoven with other bards characters, that it would need a serious rewrite. Unfortunately I don't have the time available at the moment. I was looking forward to retiring in September but it doesn't look like that's going to happen just yet. I like the sound of a graphic novel, know any good illustrators. lol. |
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Post by Phalon on Feb 16, 2017 7:25:55 GMT -6
Time is always the culprit, isn't it! I'm sorry your retirement looks like it'll be delayed.
Sorry, I don't. Perhaps during some of that spare time you don't have, you could take up illustrating!
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Post by moonglum on Feb 21, 2017 14:08:37 GMT -6
Moonglum, have you ever thought about or done anything with Jason's story outside of the board?. Ooh, you are a very naughty lady. You got me thinking, didn't you, and that's always dangerous when women let men think for themselves. |
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Post by Phalon on Feb 22, 2017 7:07:58 GMT -6
Well, good! I honestly think you should unleash Jason into the world outside of Whoosh!
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Post by moonglum on Feb 22, 2017 10:25:57 GMT -6
I have made a start. I've downloaded every post i've done. Now comes the hard part, reading, deleting, editing, plotting, rewriting, reading, re-editing etc. There is a little voice inside saying 'make time, make time...' LOL.
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Post by Phalon on Feb 23, 2017 5:45:06 GMT -6
I hope the little voice is persistent and grows louder!
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Post by Phalon on Apr 18, 2017 6:06:38 GMT -6
Glad to see there's a new installment, Moonglum.
How's the editing going on the story as a whole?
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Post by moonglum on Apr 19, 2017 11:11:26 GMT -6
Glad to see there's a new installment, Moonglum. How's the editing going on the story as a whole? Thank you Phalon. It's going very slowly. I'm about a third of the way through taking out references to other peoples characters. Then it's all down to editing and rewriting. I did have to laugh though when I read it again from the beginning. All those howlers. Things written twice, plot points that reversed themselves for no reason or went nowhere. I can hear my old english teacher saying "must do better next time." |
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Post by Phalon on Apr 20, 2017 5:05:49 GMT -6
HA! I bet! That's the thing about writing with other people - it's fun, but there's a lot of curve balls when you're trying to incorporate someone else's plot into your own. That, of course, is why the subtitle of the story was "Whoosher We Had a Plot"!
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Post by Phalon on Jul 17, 2017 4:44:31 GMT -6
"No!", she yells at the screen, "No, no, no!!! Not the cellar!! Do you people ever watch horror movies?! Anywhere but the cellar!"
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Post by moonglum on Jul 17, 2017 12:38:00 GMT -6
Lol. Will they never learn!
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Post by Phalon on Jul 18, 2017 4:38:16 GMT -6
Apparently not!
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Post by Phalon on Aug 11, 2017 6:05:33 GMT -6
It's nice to see Aphemenie again....though not in the precarious position in which she currently resides!
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Post by moonglum on Aug 14, 2017 12:48:40 GMT -6
Yes she does seem to have suffered a lot in the last couple of years. Still, I never did like 'happy ever after' stories.
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Post by Phalon on Aug 16, 2017 5:58:35 GMT -6
Well, dang! Say it isn't so! Hoping you didn't just spoil the ending!
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Post by Phalon on Sept 5, 2017 6:10:13 GMT -6
I like Tillie! That girl has gumption.
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